Quote from: CRANKYpants on December 06, 2008, 09:04:57 AM
WHAT? NO LITERARY CRITICS OUT THERE WHO WANT TO COMMENT ON MY POEM THAT I WROTE ONE NIGHT BACK IN '99 WHILE I STILL HAD MY RESTAURANT - WHILE WATCHING GROUP AFTER GROUP USE THE "CHRISTMAS PARTY" AS AN EXCUSE TO GET DRUNK?

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Ok, but remember, YOU ASKED FOR IT! 

A "LITERARY" critique of Thane's poem  by A. Grinch

There are few words to describe the awfulness of the text which is an insult to any paper it written on, rendering it useless even for lining bird cages, let alone wrapping fish. Being forced to read this poem, seemingly at gunpoint, will make one realize that it is just plain dismal, depressing, and utterly lacking in any artistic or social worth. My advice would be not to even start reading this putrid exercise in scatology, as there is simply never a wrong time to flush a turd. Anyone who fails to take warning, will soon mourn the tragic, un-recoverable loss of minutes to their lives, leading to a fatal self infliction, or a lifetime prescription of anti-depressants. No doubt, these fates being far too good for the talentless hack of a poet, who condemned English words to such a collusion of misery.  In polite summary, the verses of this doggerel intertwine like the ropes of a tangled parachute, and all the helpless reader can do is look on aghast as the whole abortive fiasco plummets toward Earth.

Quote from: derricka on December 07, 2008, 12:13:36 AM
Ok, but remember, YOU ASKED FOR IT! 

A "LITERARY" critique of Thane's poem  by A. Grinch

There are few words to describe the awfulness of the text which is an insult to any paper it written on, rendering it useless even for lining bird cages, let alone wrapping fish. Being forced to read this poem, seemingly at gunpoint, will make one realize that it is just plain dismal, depressing, and utterly lacking in any artistic or social worth. My advice would be not to even start reading this putrid exercise in scatology, as there is simply never a wrong time to flush a turd. Anyone who fails to take warning, will soon mourn the tragic, un-recoverable loss of minutes to their lives, leading to a fatal self infliction, or a lifetime prescription of anti-depressants. No doubt, these fates being far too good for the talentless hack of a poet, who condemned English words to such a collusion of misery.  In polite summary, the verses of this doggerel intertwine like the ropes of a tangled parachute, and all the helpless reader can do is look on aghast as the whole abortive fiasco plummets toward Earth.

VERY NICE WORK...! NOT THAT I THINK YOU CAN TOP THIS ONE BUT, AS A POINT OF REFERENCE CAN I GET YOUR CRITIQUE OF, "IT'S A WONDERFUL LIFE"? 

CHRISTMAS CHEERS!
Thane

Quote from: pdr2_esmolbra on September 25, 2008, 08:28:52 AM
Hello there

We are a group of students from Queen's University Engineering Physics.
We chose to study Hanes' generator for a project in a lab course, and help in the understanding of the effect. We are actually aiming to build a similar set up and get data out of it.

-Pedro A. Molina

DEAR PEDRO,

JUST CURIOUS - HOW DID THING GO FOR YOUR PHYSICS GROUP - ASSUMING THEY "WENT" AT ALL?

CHEERS
Thane

Pedro probably got scolded by his professor.

@ EVERYONE:

HOW ABOUT SOME POETRY IN MOTION THEN:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r5z1zpajulU

THIS IS OUR LATEST COIL - TAKING INTO ACCOUNT  ALL OF OUR PREVIOUS MISTAKES AND MAKING A REAL MONSTER!

CHEERS
Thane